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i make it for my own server

still no coding

if have someone interesting to try coding

can inbox me

hehe

rate please 1/10

thx

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4/10

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thx for rate

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1/10

Font Sucks

Color Mixture is weird~

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Make it colorful dude.. 5/10 ;)

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ok

thx

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1/10 no more to say...

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"1/10 no more to say / 1/10 font sucks.." Yeah, not offering much feedback there.

Come on guys, give this guy some suggestions for improvement instead of being completely rude and just saying 1/10.

I've seen WAY worse than this and I'm sure you guys have too. Some suggestions:

Seems plain, you only have two RO images, you may be going for a clean simple site and if you are, well you achieved it.

But even then its ridiculously plain, maybe you should take a peek at some other designs to get a good feel of what you want to do. You can make a simple clean website but not make it look so 'dull' so to speak.

As for your first try this is actually decent, i've seen way worse which looked like someone threw up in MS Paint. Just keep fiddling with photoshop or whatever it is your using, try using more colors, images and play with fonts. There are some REALLY nice fonts on dafont.com.

Can't wait to see what else you come up with.

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yeah

i think also

need added some image ragnarok

hard to find now image like icons

actually then for comment

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I like the lighting done with the characters. Nicely done on that.

Now, overall, it's WAY too dark and black.

Please, don't use Ragnarok Online 2 characters if you're using/hosting a Ragnarok Online 1 private server.. it doesn't make sense to add Ragnarok Online 2 characters into the mix. Try adding some Ragnarok Online 1 charas, some mobs, etc. Make some more vibrant colours.. too dull overall.

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Nice attempt, try to make it more colorful next time, add some light colors and some cool backgrounds and also add a little more details on your design ;)

4/10

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thx faintlights

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sorry for double post

just need u guys comment

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I believe you will get a little bit higher rating with full content..

Finish up your design by adding footer, content (using Lorem Ipsum), header, login box, and so on..

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thx elven

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Your second version is a lot better =D with the images added in. You should update your first post whenever you made better versions of your design.

Yeah, I agree with Elven about finishing the design so that you can get more useful constructive criticisms.

Keep up the good work! I personally like how clean it looks, better than the original Ceres design anyways. Can't wait to see your future edits!

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thx yuki

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IMO, the site is good... I like the lightings... but you have lack of logos and backgrounds like putting a town as background ? or add a logo for Facebook and Review Us.

Overall ratings 7/10

need some improvements like Elven said.

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ok

thx guys

for u guys comments

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For an RO style website I feel like it has no "ro style" like, RO is very graphical and very well lit with some sort of background. Using the original ragnarok one logo is cheating I think in my own opinion. Everything looks drag and drop with some back lighting to it. It does need to be improved, take some time and study web gfx for a while and improve your site while you study =D

2/10

I give you 2 because, 1 point is for the products idea, and another point is for trying. There is nothing wrong with trying!

Good luck, I wanna see a final product =D

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thx mirage

i will try approve my design

:D

but still find somone to coding

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finally i finish this coding website for my own server diablo ragnarok

hope u guys can rate it again

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thx shadow

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9/10 :(

because maybe i can't design ceres cp like your work.. so i will not giving you a small rate :P

Good job !

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