manabeast Posted May 8, 2012 Posted May 8, 2012 (edited) Hello! i'm Ryo, at here i put my game name Manabeast. I'm newbie just playing Photoshop around. and i just want release some of my Design ^^. use as you like. This can be Loading Screen or Login Screen. attach with PSD you can edit to your server name. if you like my Design work. Edit: my friend tell me this is not call art. is call design so i change the mistake title. Team in condition, You may use, modify, and host all of my released. credits anime character: google,sunzrxz,other who made those. credits Design: Manabeast/Ryo [showcase Only!] [Free Release below] Free release 1 My server Bedge also can use for my guild master logo Download Link Free PSD File , 3 Release File. http://www.mediafire...6n757u76noo4d6n ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- New Release, Loading/Login Screen. Free Loading/Login Screen 1. Download Link: http://www.mediafire...j882f3ogs4fj4b3 Free Loading/Login Screen 2. Download Link: http://www.mediafire...7gs2w2a0f5u0t75 Free Loading/Login Screen 3. Download Link: http://www.mediafire...bmvakv16898dqdu Free Loading/Login Screen 4. Download Link: http://www.mediafire...dt71ryfd7bmba23 Free Loading/Login Screen 5. Download Link: http://www.mediafire...s6abo20ed14w47q Free Loading/Login Screen 6. Download Link: http://www.mediafire...7y7aw7o36tyhzz7 Edited June 23, 2012 by manabeast Quote
Rikimaru Posted May 9, 2012 Posted May 9, 2012 Doesn't look really bad,but for me I don't really like green. If I hear "Mana" I think of Mana on Warcraft III ,which was colored blue , but the font looks nice,maybe you could add an item to it or a RO Character,so it looks more RO-ish. 1 Quote
manabeast Posted May 11, 2012 Author Posted May 11, 2012 ｔｈｘ ｒｉｋｉｍａｒｕ．．．ｂｅｃａｕｓｅ ｔｈｉｓ ｄｅｓｉｇｎ ｉ ｔｒｙ ｄｕｎ ａｄｄ ｃｈａｒａｃｔｅｒ ｉｎ． ｗａｎｔ ｔｏ ｐｒｏｍｏｔｅ ｔｈｅ ｗｏｒｄ ｏｆ ｍｙ ｓｅｒｖｅｒ ｈａｈａ．．． ｉ ｗｉｌｌ ｔｒｙ ａｄｄ ｓｅｅ ｗｈａｔ ｗｉｌｌ ｈａｐｐｅｎ． Quote
simplynice Posted May 11, 2012 Posted May 11, 2012 The word should be readable and not messy i suggest. Quote
Mystery Posted May 12, 2012 Posted May 12, 2012 I personally don't like the lettering. TO my eyes, they seem a bit too distorted. Try to make the wording more visible and vibrant. Quote
manabeast Posted May 15, 2012 Author Posted May 15, 2012 I try to make it more visible @@ and clea most of the texture..... hmm.. wondering this better abit or not? or use back old one? Quote
vBrenth Posted May 26, 2012 Posted May 26, 2012 To many leaves for logo, and thats so huge if you put that on website if you make it small the other words like ragnarok online are not going to be readable i think Quote
manabeast Posted May 27, 2012 Author Posted May 27, 2012 ya. i can resize using photoshop dun worry. this is just for show case =) it's ok one. ya.. that's why i make another with simple without many leaf =) Quote
eKoh Posted June 2, 2012 Posted June 2, 2012 I suggest you to make it more readable, and it would tell to the player about what your "company" (in this case the server) does. Quote
Macrox Posted June 5, 2012 Posted June 5, 2012 Manabeast can you send me the render for this? http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/7420/manabedge.png Quote
manabeast Posted June 5, 2012 Author Posted June 5, 2012 what you mean render? do you mean you want the pdf? Quote
manabeast Posted June 18, 2012 Author Posted June 18, 2012 email done. you can edit to your logo if you like to =) Quote
manabeast Posted June 21, 2012 Author Posted June 21, 2012 (edited) what you mean? if you want the psd i can send you too... free to use... =) well.. i should edit the topic. Edit, pendrive left at home... release tonight. Edited June 21, 2012 by manabeast Quote
manabeast Posted June 22, 2012 Author Posted June 22, 2012 (edited) Free Release, Custom Loading / Login Screen... if you like my work. just say thanks ^^ Edited June 24, 2012 by manabeast Quote
manabeast Posted June 25, 2012 Author Posted June 25, 2012 so many ppl view no a single person like my work O,O? no nice? or my wallpaper do too bad? Quote
Wolfeh Posted June 25, 2012 Posted June 25, 2012 Well, for one, don't stretch characters. I see on some you just made them shorter, but if you want to make them smaller you should resize from the corner instead of from the top or side, so they don't stretch and remain uniform. In photoshop, you can have it open in another window and change image size but keep the portions the same. But, even with this trick, it may still seem not "right", because instead of one character looking shorter, they will just look smaller, its hard to explain... Secondly, don't mix characters, use characters from a single artist instead of a few from each artist. This way, it looks more natural and not photoshopped. I'll do an example here... Bad: Stretched characters, no color theme, different styles (chibi and standard), different artists, bad text, few characters the same size, and probably more... Good (or at least I think so... I'm no expert): Color theme (possibly too much of one. characters had their saturation (desaturated) and hue adjusted), paint brushes (rather dislike the one in the upper right hand corner), text matches and blends, characters from same artist, same size, and not stretched, when background was made larger, I adjusted contrast, brightness, and shadows/highlights, and did the same to the characters so they would fit in more. When resizing the background, I chose "bicubic smoother" which is why the previous adjustments really improved the image. Text has stroke, outer glow, pattern, and opacity settings adjusted to fit in. Smaller text just has a different color and stroke, same text but a different text may have more of an impact. Has an overall "nightlife" theme. Your logo I also dislike. I would use a different font maybe. The jagged edges turn me off, but I know it is quite diffiult to find one with smooth edges. Using stroke may fix this. I would make the glow spread out more, making it look more like stroke is rather bleh. You might be able to get away with the font if you play with it more. In the newer one, the "Ragnarok Online" is stretched and I don't like the font too much either, go more with the nature theme which you already have going, the font you used is more like a knight font or renaissance, not nature. But other than that, I do like it, the second version especially. 1 Quote
manabeast Posted June 25, 2012 Author Posted June 25, 2012 adjusted contrast, brightness, and shadows/highlights, i still newbie. still learning .. for you mention this. that i never even go touch. i should go touch more and learn how to do more .... i also have feel the size i i change until no nice... thanks for your comment. now i can know where i do wrong. i still alot thing dunno use photoshop. currently i just learn cut and resize those basic. Quote
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