whitesn Posted March 29, 2012 Group: Members Topic Count: 13 Topics Per Day: 0.00 Content Count: 193 Reputation: 14 Joined: 12/02/11 Last Seen: October 30, 2018 Author Share Posted March 29, 2012 I like your template 4 and I hope you add more button in your template 4 likes Forum Rules and Donation. hehe 9/10! Oh yeah maybe in other template That's already finished and I'm reluctant to edit it more ( adding another menus on the sidebar ). Thanks anyway for the feedback Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hayate Yoshida Posted March 29, 2012 Group: Members Topic Count: 8 Topics Per Day: 0.00 Content Count: 206 Reputation: 16 Joined: 01/03/12 Last Seen: March 16 Share Posted March 29, 2012 (edited) Honestly, this is really good work for being a beginner. The colors on your first design work very well with each other, it could use a tiny bit of improving on the palette of it, it could possibly use some centering but that is simply a preference not a design flaw. On your 2nd design it seems like it needs more dynamics to it's design (maybe some more colors or something); the footer should also extend the whole page. On your 3rd one it could use a different color combination and probably some rounded corners. Great job on the 4th one! A best practice for PHP: you should always use curly brackets with if statements. For instance, you had this: if (! $sock = @fsockopen($ip, $mapport, $num, $error, 5)) echo '<font color="red"><strike>Map Server</strike></font> <b'; When it should be this: if (! $sock = @fsockopen($ip, $mapport, $num, $error, 5)) { [TAB]echo '<font color="red"><strike>Map Server</strike></font> <b'; } Edited March 29, 2012 by Shinon Yoshida Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jezu Posted March 29, 2012 Group: Members Topic Count: 29 Topics Per Day: 0.01 Content Count: 566 Reputation: 34 Joined: 11/17/11 Last Seen: November 6, 2023 Share Posted March 29, 2012 (edited) Brilliant for the Temple #4. It gives more ROish design. 9.5/10 though .5 needs more body backgrounds.. you should decrease the height of the background you've been using since I only see clouds and not the floor xD. 9.5 for the content making it easy to edit in .TXT only. but anyway, we can put more images since it's FREE and all credits to you Mr. 2essy2killu Edited March 29, 2012 by Jezu Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitesn Posted March 29, 2012 Group: Members Topic Count: 13 Topics Per Day: 0.00 Content Count: 193 Reputation: 14 Joined: 12/02/11 Last Seen: October 30, 2018 Author Share Posted March 29, 2012 Honestly, this is really good work for being a beginner. The colors on your first design work very well with each other, it could use a tiny bit of improving on the palette of it, it could possibly use some centering but that is simply a preference not a design flaw. On your 2nd design it seems like it needs more dynamics to it's design (maybe some more colors or something); the footer should also extend the whole page. On your 3rd one it could use a different color combination and probably some rounded corners. Great job on the 4th one! A best practice for PHP: you should always use curly brackets with if statements. For instance, you had this: if (! $sock = @fsockopen($ip, $mapport, $num, $error, 5)) echo '<font color="red"><strike>Map Server</strike></font> <b'; When it should be this: if (! $sock = @fsockopen($ip, $mapport, $num, $error, 5)) { [TAB]echo '<font color="red"><strike>Map Server</strike></font> <b'; } Hahaha thanks for the feedback honestly I think the footer colors of the first design seems sucks xD For the second design yah I'm not really satisfied with my own work, but I don't know what to do with it anymore after I finished it :PP The 3rd one is Mosaic so it doesn't have any curve ( see the windows 8 preview ) yeah I like this theme without curve one seems more neat xD The 4th one is just simple. I got the concept from roBrowser design and not think it from scratch so yeah most credit for them Oh yeah for the PHP code thanks for the advice. I was copying it actually ( I got somewhere in eAthena in the support forum xD ) Brilliant for the Temple #4. It gives more ROish design. 9.5/10 though .5 needs more body backgrounds.. you should decrease the height of the background you've been using since I only see clouds and not the floor xD. 9.5 for the content making it easy to edit in .TXT only. but anyway, we can put more images since it's FREE and all credits to you Mr. 2essy2killu Yeah sure I hope people change the image themselves since I was not really into the image I'll try making it as user-friendly as I can.. Thanks for the feedback Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mirage Posted March 29, 2012 Group: Members Topic Count: 15 Topics Per Day: 0.00 Content Count: 217 Reputation: 18 Joined: 11/20/11 Last Seen: March 25, 2014 Share Posted March 29, 2012 I've looked at the progress of your templates. And you are learning quite well. I like how you are taking the critiques and comments well and using them as positives. Good job, keep up the good work. Can't wait to see your next template. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitesn Posted March 29, 2012 Group: Members Topic Count: 13 Topics Per Day: 0.00 Content Count: 193 Reputation: 14 Joined: 12/02/11 Last Seen: October 30, 2018 Author Share Posted March 29, 2012 I've looked at the progress of your templates. And you are learning quite well. I like how you are taking the critiques and comments well and using them as positives. Good job, keep up the good work. Can't wait to see your next template. Yeah, you got nothing if you reject the critiques... Planning to integrate php-sql for the next template ( maybe, but still not sure ). PHP has a lot of syntaxes rather than basic programming like pascal. Need some times to adapt to it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mirage Posted March 29, 2012 Group: Members Topic Count: 15 Topics Per Day: 0.00 Content Count: 217 Reputation: 18 Joined: 11/20/11 Last Seen: March 25, 2014 Share Posted March 29, 2012 Its just flux, you'll get the hang of it easy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ngek202 Posted March 29, 2012 Group: Members Topic Count: 40 Topics Per Day: 0.01 Content Count: 530 Reputation: 33 Joined: 01/17/12 Last Seen: August 16, 2017 Share Posted March 29, 2012 I've noticed on template 4 when you hover your mouse on Home Button sometimes it goes nuts rapid flickering., dunno how to explain it sorry. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitesn Posted March 29, 2012 Group: Members Topic Count: 13 Topics Per Day: 0.00 Content Count: 193 Reputation: 14 Joined: 12/02/11 Last Seen: October 30, 2018 Author Share Posted March 29, 2012 Its just flux, you'll get the hang of it easy Yeah maybe i'll try making flux theme maybe next time I've noticed on template 4 when you hover your mouse on Home Button sometimes it goes nuts rapid flickering., dunno how to explain it sorry. Yeah I noticed it too, but I don't get it why it's only flickering on home button.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hayate Yoshida Posted March 30, 2012 Group: Members Topic Count: 8 Topics Per Day: 0.00 Content Count: 206 Reputation: 16 Joined: 01/03/12 Last Seen: March 16 Share Posted March 30, 2012 (edited) I can take a look at why that would be when I get some extra time. PS: A really great tool that I use is the Firebug Firefox plugin. Edited March 30, 2012 by Shinon Yoshida Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitesn Posted March 30, 2012 Group: Members Topic Count: 13 Topics Per Day: 0.00 Content Count: 193 Reputation: 14 Joined: 12/02/11 Last Seen: October 30, 2018 Author Share Posted March 30, 2012 I can take a look at why that would be when I get some extra time. PS: A really great tool that I use is the Firebug Firefox plugin. Hahaha yeah instead of Firebug in the newest version of firefox you can inspect element too actually.. Thanks for the info Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hayate Yoshida Posted March 30, 2012 Group: Members Topic Count: 8 Topics Per Day: 0.00 Content Count: 206 Reputation: 16 Joined: 01/03/12 Last Seen: March 16 Share Posted March 30, 2012 I can take a look at why that would be when I get some extra time. PS: A really great tool that I use is the Firebug Firefox plugin. Hahaha yeah instead of Firebug in the newest version of firefox you can inspect element too actually.. Thanks for the info You're right but Firefox doesn't let you edit the code live to test out things in HTML or CSS Firebug does, Firebug also has so many more features in it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitesn Posted March 30, 2012 Group: Members Topic Count: 13 Topics Per Day: 0.00 Content Count: 193 Reputation: 14 Joined: 12/02/11 Last Seen: October 30, 2018 Author Share Posted March 30, 2012 You're right but Firefox doesn't let you edit the code live to test out things in HTML or CSS Firebug does, Firebug also has so many more features in it. Yeah I've installed it too lol. Usually I just wanna know the CSS syntaxes so I can use it later Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matrixfox Posted March 31, 2012 Group: Members Topic Count: 15 Topics Per Day: 0.00 Content Count: 277 Reputation: 76 Joined: 11/23/11 Last Seen: September 21, 2014 Share Posted March 31, 2012 I really like your work, keep it up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitesn Posted March 31, 2012 Group: Members Topic Count: 13 Topics Per Day: 0.00 Content Count: 193 Reputation: 14 Joined: 12/02/11 Last Seen: October 30, 2018 Author Share Posted March 31, 2012 I really like your work, keep it up! Hi matrixfox thanks for you comment Please also give some feedbacks about those design so I can make better next time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matrixfox Posted March 31, 2012 Group: Members Topic Count: 15 Topics Per Day: 0.00 Content Count: 277 Reputation: 76 Joined: 11/23/11 Last Seen: September 21, 2014 Share Posted March 31, 2012 Honestly seems like you have HTML and CSS down. Try learning more javascript and php. I ingored jQuery for quite some time, made me a noob, lol. You also seem to have a better art taste than me. That is a really big part of web design, it's art. Also flexibility, you never want your client to feel boxed in. In the end, try new stuff, act like a mad scientist, test your ability and what's next. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hayate Yoshida Posted March 31, 2012 Group: Members Topic Count: 8 Topics Per Day: 0.00 Content Count: 206 Reputation: 16 Joined: 01/03/12 Last Seen: March 16 Share Posted March 31, 2012 (edited) jQuery is a really awesome JavaScript library, one of the best I've ever worked with. It's very flexible and powerful for presentation to the user. PHP is great for many things from very simple session storing to a complex system such as the forum software rAthena uses (IP Board). Both are easy to learn, for PHP I recommend PHPAcademy on youtube, php.net, and for jQuery: the main website has a really great amount of information, just ggogle it. Edited March 31, 2012 by Shinon Yoshida Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitesn Posted April 1, 2012 Group: Members Topic Count: 13 Topics Per Day: 0.00 Content Count: 193 Reputation: 14 Joined: 12/02/11 Last Seen: October 30, 2018 Author Share Posted April 1, 2012 Honestly seems like you have HTML and CSS down. Try learning more javascript and php. I ingored jQuery for quite some time, made me a noob, lol. You also seem to have a better art taste than me. That is a really big part of web design, it's art. Also flexibility, you never want your client to feel boxed in. In the end, try new stuff, act like a mad scientist, test your ability and what's next. Yes I'm now on PHP, learned already some basic algorithm ( for , if , while ) and the arithmathics mechanics, but I still don't get what should I use them for. jQuery is a really awesome JavaScript library, one of the best I've ever worked with. It's very flexible and powerful for presentation to the user. PHP is great for many things from very simple session storing to a complex system such as the forum software rAthena uses (IP Board). Both are easy to learn, for PHP I recommend PHPAcademy on youtube, php.net, and for jQuery: the main website has a really great amount of information, just ggogle it. For javascript I'vent touched them. I think gonna go w3schools for that js Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hayate Yoshida Posted April 1, 2012 Group: Members Topic Count: 8 Topics Per Day: 0.00 Content Count: 206 Reputation: 16 Joined: 01/03/12 Last Seen: March 16 Share Posted April 1, 2012 w3schools is also a great resource as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitesn Posted April 2, 2012 Group: Members Topic Count: 13 Topics Per Day: 0.00 Content Count: 193 Reputation: 14 Joined: 12/02/11 Last Seen: October 30, 2018 Author Share Posted April 2, 2012 w3schools is also a great resource as well. Yeah I learn html and css there in a short time ( thanks to w3 ), but these php really have a lot of syntaxes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ngek202 Posted April 3, 2012 Group: Members Topic Count: 40 Topics Per Day: 0.01 Content Count: 530 Reputation: 33 Joined: 01/17/12 Last Seen: August 16, 2017 Share Posted April 3, 2012 @2essy2killu if you don't mind can I ask for PSD for buttons? the one used for Home Info & Control Panel? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kirito Posted April 3, 2012 Group: Members Topic Count: 9 Topics Per Day: 0.00 Content Count: 128 Reputation: 1 Joined: 03/19/12 Last Seen: July 10, 2014 Share Posted April 3, 2012 keep up the good work! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hades03 Posted April 3, 2012 Group: Members Topic Count: 81 Topics Per Day: 0.02 Content Count: 242 Reputation: 3 Joined: 01/01/12 Last Seen: August 14, 2015 Share Posted April 3, 2012 @2essy2Killu can you pls make this a boy same size ok ty and paki chane narin yung job to Shadow Chaser ok ty Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitesn Posted April 4, 2012 Group: Members Topic Count: 13 Topics Per Day: 0.00 Content Count: 193 Reputation: 14 Joined: 12/02/11 Last Seen: October 30, 2018 Author Share Posted April 4, 2012 keep up the good work! OK xD @2essy2killu if you don't mind can I ask for PSD for buttons? the one used for Home Info & Control Panel? To be honest I deleted once I saved it png lol xD @2essy2Killu can you pls make this a boy same size ok ty and paki chane narin yung job to Shadow Chaser ok ty Whoa I can't draw I got it from google and just put it there Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ngek202 Posted April 4, 2012 Group: Members Topic Count: 40 Topics Per Day: 0.01 Content Count: 530 Reputation: 33 Joined: 01/17/12 Last Seen: August 16, 2017 Share Posted April 4, 2012 lol it's fine I already made some buttons. but if it's possible if you can add a server status like on template 3 for template 4 above the banner images. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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