Crispy RO - Just another Flux CP design

[Olrox 923]

It was just like 2 weeks ago, that I begun to accept commisions of web designs and I had my first one. Crispy RO is a design that btw, is going to be coded thanks by Rahul.

 

I'm looking to improve by your reviews that I appreciate as ever.

 

Preview:

 

Full Size:

---> http://goo.gl/rRmgbK

 

I'm looking for any kind of feedback you can give me.  I'm new on the area, so I really appreciate every suggestion to continue improving on. Also if anyone is interested into this kind of works, please can contact me up.

 

Thanks in advance

[Najara 238]

I like how it looks. Clean and cute, not too crowed either.

The only thing that comes to my attention to give criticism feedback on is the top banner (background) image. It's absolutely beautifully done but the whole design looks chibi-themed, except for that part.

But overall, a very nice design~ 8/10

 

Psst, you misspelled "Give". (2nd row in the Top sites part)   

 

[KamiShi 213]

I like it, but you have to do better if you want to marry me. <33

[Chunji 0]

this one is way better than the vintage one. 

[Bisuke 9]

I like it, It feels kinda warm-comic-ish theme! Great job! 10/10!