script rent item npc [basic]

[GM Takumirai]

prontera,138,183,5 script Mount System Manager 921,{
mes "[Mount Manager]";
mes "You want to Rent the [Reins of Mount]?. you need to pay 10,000,000z and bring 2x [Reins] - drop by abbysmal knight monster";
mes "This item will be expire for 7 days";
mes "[Mount Manager]";
mes "Let see if you already Have [Reins of Mount] and the requirements...";
next;

if (countitem(12622) > 1) goto noway;
if (zeny < 10000000) goto nocash;
if (countitem(1064) < 2) goto noitem;

rentitem 12622,432000;
set Zeny,Zeny -10000000;
delitem 1064,2;
close;

noway:
mes "you can't Rent [Reins of Mount]. You already have 1x in your inventory.";
close;

nocash:
mes "[Mount Manager]";
mes "You dont have enough money to rent it, please come back if you already have enough money.";
close;

noitem:
mes "[Mount Manager]";
mes "You dont have enough [Reins] you can get it from abbysmal knight monster.";
close;

L_bye:
mes "[Mount Manager]";
mes "Have a nice day, please come back again.";
close;
}

can someone check my script?

Edited March 22, 2012 by Takumirai

[Emistry]

this line ?

zeny -10000000

suppose to be

set Zeny,Zeny -10000000;

[GM Takumirai]

thanks emistry, i also want to ask if my timeline in renting is correct?..

[Emistry]

for 1 week...

i think it is suppose to be

 rentitem 12662,604800;

[GM Takumirai]

@Emistry i tried the script still it doesn't appear when i tried it..

the problem is it gets the requirements but it doesnt give the rented item?

- Solved -

prontera,218,197,5 script Mount Manager 894,{
mes "[Mount Manager]";
mes "You want to Rent the [Reins of Mount]?. you need to pay 10,000,000z and bring 2x [Reins] - drop by abbysmal knight monster";
mes "This item will be expire for 7 days";
mes "[Mount Manager]";
mes "Do you have all the requirements needed?...";
menu "Yes",-,"No, Im going back later..",L_bye;
mes "[Mount Manager]";
mes "Let see if you already Have Rented a [Reins of Mount]..";
next;
if (countitem(12622) > 1) goto noway;
if (zeny < 1000000) goto nocash;
if (countitem(1064) < 2) goto noitem;

mes "[Mount Manager]";
mes "Are you sure you want to rent [Reins of Mount]?";
menu "Yes",-,"No",L_bye;
rentitem 12622,604800;
set Zeny,Zeny -1000000;
delitem 1064,2;
close;
noway:
mes "you can't Rent [Reins of Mount]. You already have 1x in your inventory.";
close;
nocash:
mes "[Mount Manager]";
mes "You dont have enough money to rent it, please come back if you already have enough money.";
close;
noitem:
mes "[Mount Manager]";
mes "You dont have enough [Reins] you can get it from abbysmal knight monster.";
close;
L_bye:
mes "[Mount Manager]";
mes "Have a nice day, please come back again.";
close;
}
}