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Please rate my image.Maybe for login screen

it my 1st time using Adobe Photoshop to make RO image

-credit to all the pic owner

i only cut , copy and paste until it reach my satisfaction

:)

rate it please

100/100 cause 10/10 is too high..

please comment it so that i can a better image

(i know the font is not good)

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A+ for effort?

There's a lot to improve upon here. Like you said, you've just copy pasted everything into a single image and that doesn't really work.

The font and the styling you've used on it is horrible as well.

I suggest you look at other wallpapers and emulate some of the styles used.

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A+ for effort?

There's a lot to improve upon here. Like you said, you've just copy pasted everything into a single image and that doesn't really work.

The font and the styling you've used on it is horrible as well.

I suggest you look at other wallpapers and emulate some of the styles used.

ok.

thank you for your comment.

A+ for effort?

haha

thank

for pic?

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Okie, I say for effort B-, since you copy pasted which I personally, don't like.

You need to focus more on details, special details which make the image look really nice. Try and find unique items, things people do not normally use.

Something I see a lot in newbies on photoshop is lots of Bevel and Emboss (Layer Options). Too much of that is boring and unoriginal.

As I said, missing a few details and uniqueness :) Try and get brushes, they help out a lot when doing stuff like that. Font doesn't fit much with the picture, and with the white angel and black background, it doesn't look too good.

Things to focus on in my opinion would be:

Background. Check the colours in it and try to make the colours on all images be related to the background. It's also to flashy on the bottom left, try and make it blend.

Images. Moving it horizontally doesn't work much with the same image. Add some layer properties to those images, change the levels and all the rest of it.

Font/Text. The blazing/evil text you put in does not work with the images. If your trying to make a dark and evil loading screen, match the images to the font colour as well. Of course, they don't have to be exactly the same colour.

Uniqueness. Lots of people who are new to Photoshop do exactly the same thing as all the others. Make something which would stand out. Check out other Loading Screens and get ideas from them.

Generally, your missing out on a lot of important elements. For a first-starter, it's okay.

Rating out of 100 (Since I didn't understand what you meant by 10/10 being to high and all the rest), I'll give it 50/100.

Good job, try to improve though :)

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Well, since you just copy and paste. Effort wise, thats a C

The concepts don't match up as well,

for instance. Your font leads me to think the product is going to either be, evil, contain some heavy war content or be about battles.

Then I look and your pictures there are 2 Valkyrie angels which those renders could be used in the same content but they are HAPPY angels. Not battle driven nor evil.

But then there is a pink poring singing.....thats out of the content which I was believed the product was about. The abstract brush on the bottom also is out of content.

Overall,

I say, study some works

http://www.7themez.com/2011/02/ragnarok-online-wallpaper-theme.html

2/10 or 20/100

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