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Hi guys!

Im pretty still.. Under 'development' when it comes to making images.. etc.. basically Photoshop Lol. Anyways, I've created just some images; some with multiple versions of the same image.

Basically, what do you think of them?

Before you reply, make sure to use common knowledge if you're gonna criticize.. Don't just reply with, "Nah I don't like it" without giving a reason why you don't.

Thanks.
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Archieve


Version 1: wikilogo.png
Version 2: wikilogo2.png
Version 3: wikilogo3.png



mrowiki.png


Archieve


Storyline: Storyline.png

Features: features.png



Just GHMemorial Features


Login.png
ghmemorial.png
memorials.png



Banners:
Banner2.gif

Banner1.gif


Random Loading Screens: (Pretty big)


loading1.jpg
loading2.jpg
welcome-1.jpg
welcome2.jpg

 

These are since last year I had them.

Titles (2012):

currency.png

ticketsystem.png

achievementsystem.png

mountsystem.png

manuksplendide.png

bifrost.png

malangdo.png

malaya-2.png

dewata.png

brasilis.png

malaya-1.png

eclage.png

devotion-1.png

storyline-1.png

features-1.png

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Last three looks good. Few suggestions though...

On the last wiki header/banner, I think that rice/slime looking monster thing shouldn't cover the o.

Your combination of mysterious and wiki is interesting and definitely something I haven't seen much before however I don't think it works.

All the titles looks nice however, it seems too busy for me with all those monsters around the letters. Maybe decrease the number of monsters by a notch?

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i think it need some more fresh color to make it more eye catchy...?

and more cute monster /no1

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Last three looks good. Few suggestions though...

On the last wiki header/banner, I think that rice/slime looking monster thing shouldn't cover the o.

Your combination of mysterious and wiki is interesting and definitely something I haven't seen much before however I don't think it works.

All the titles looks nice however, it seems too busy for me with all those monsters around the letters. Maybe decrease the number of monsters by a notch?

The Rice Cake mob? Well, you don't think it works because the way the i slants for the word 'Wiki'? Or would you rather prefer having the i facing straight going along with MysteriousRO? Yeah, I'd figure the amount of mobs made it look 'cluttered' ;P

i think it need some more fresh color to make it more eye catchy...?

and more cute monster /no1

Making it more eye catching by adding bright colours? Well, gotta watch out for the way the word's colour would collide with mobs used + background on where the image is placed. :)

What are your 'cute monsters'?

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my cute mob would be poring / poporing / munak / bogun and more.. but these are my fav mobs

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I agree, that the mobs make it look cluttered. I like the idea though, of replacing certain letters with mobs, but it looks like you placed the mob over the original text, it might look better if you remove that particular letter, replace it with some spaces, and then place the mob there. Then, since some mobs aren't as large as the letter (like RO), you could try making them larger. Free-transform is one way (select the layer, select "Rectangular Marque Tool", right click and click "Free Transform", then drag the lower left or right corner while pressing the shift key, so the portions are constrained and it doesn't look stretched), and the other way would be opening the mob and resizing it by itself, then copying and pasting onto your original work. I would suggest going with a theme, you have cute monsters mixed with monsters that have no cute to them, so it kind of throws it off, so either go with the cute or go with the more serious ones (since the server name is Mysterious RO, serious may compliment it more if you choose ones that are mysterious or enchanting). The two red monsters (I've seen them, but don't know their names yet) don't seem to fit at all, because of their color and theme. I think those would fit more with an ocean/beach themed server. I agree with the wiki intersecting with the title, it just doesn't look right. I again like the idea, but I'm not sure as to how to make it work. You could try changing the font and font color, but if that doesn't work then hmm... Well I understand the style, you're trying to combine two subjects. Maybe try combining something related to the wiki software you're using (media wiki?), into the title, like what is seen here, instead of the text. I also like the Mysterious RO text, but the Storyline, Wiki, and Features text look too simple/typical, so they don't have that interesting/wow effect. I like Version 3 the most out of everything, because the stroke and drop shadow make it pop more.

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I agree, that the mobs make it look cluttered. I like the idea though, of replacing certain letters with mobs, but it looks like you placed the mob over the original text, it might look better if you remove that particular letter, replace it with some spaces, and then place the mob there. Then, since some mobs aren't as large as the letter (like RO), you could try making them larger. Free-transform is one way (select the layer, select "Rectangular Marque Tool", right click and click "Free Transform", then drag the lower left or right corner while pressing the shift key, so the portions are constrained and it doesn't look stretched), and the other way would be opening the mob and resizing it by itself, then copying and pasting onto your original work. I would suggest going with a theme, you have cute monsters mixed with monsters that have no cute to them, so it kind of throws it off, so either go with the cute or go with the more serious ones (since the server name is Mysterious RO, serious may compliment it more if you choose ones that are mysterious or enchanting). The two red monsters (I've seen them, but don't know their names yet) don't seem to fit at all, because of their color and theme. I think those would fit more with an ocean/beach themed server. I agree with the wiki intersecting with the title, it just doesn't look right. I again like the idea, but I'm not sure as to how to make it work. You could try changing the font and font color, but if that doesn't work then hmm... Well I understand the style, you're trying to combine two subjects. Maybe try combining something related to the wiki software you're using (media wiki?), into the title, like what is seen here, instead of the text. I also like the Mysterious RO text, but the Storyline, Wiki, and Features text look too simple/typical, so they don't have that interesting/wow effect. I like Version 3 the most out of everything, because the stroke and drop shadow make it pop more.

You've put into words things I couldn't describe to him. Nice interpretive skills.

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the "wiki" text on the first 3 banners looks like its more of a background image rather than a title..maybe you could liven up the colors? gj tho

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Wow, indeed Wolfeh, thanks /ok! Photoshop is meh to me, I don't really focus much on photoshop, basically just enough to get my by for what I really need done.

the "wiki" text on the first 3 banners looks like its more of a background image rather than a title..maybe you could liven up the colors? gj tho

Is it cause of the way it's slanted and not really mixed in with MysteriousRO?

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We meet again comic sans...

Imo never use comic sans for anything. It is an awful font.

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*Update:

This is just a draft of the banner:

Banner.gif

Comments? o_O

I know professional staff isn't aligned properly.. =/. Couldn't seem to fit it in <.>

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:D

Guessing thats Barf? lol

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Updated first post!

Note: I like my third GH image because it was my first time actually knowing how to make an image with rounded corners LOL. D:

Also, there aren't a lot of funky, funish styles at dafont.com :(

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mrowiki.png

This one is the best.

It's cute, and the colours are very eye appealing. Images like these are good!

The other wiki ones are far too cluttered, and they make me eyes and brain say "wtf" when I look at them.

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This one is the best.

It's cute, and the colours are very eye appealing. Images like these are good!

The other wiki ones are far too cluttered, and they make me eyes and brain say "wtf" when I look at them.

Thanks. I wanted to sorta combine the colours from teh Smokie ;p

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what font you use sir? i like it..XD

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what font you use sir? i like it..XD

One is Berlin and another is a custom font.

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Looks really nice Mysterious!

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Thanks guys! I'm practicing a lot lately. I don't wanna be a "Professional" designer or anything.. I just wanna do the basics and I think I'm already getting there xD

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Thanks guys! I'm practicing a lot lately. I don't wanna be a "Professional" designer or anything.. I just wanna do the basics and I think I'm already getting there xD

If you need any tips send me a message. ;)

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Added Banners D:

Banners:

Banner2.gif

Banner1.gif

The second banner is just a random name =/

I'll be creating different ones later tomorrow. Preferably, bigger size.

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Awesome work!

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Added couple new images:

loading1.jpg

loading2.jpg

welcome-1.jpg

welcome2.jpg

Comments welcomed :D!

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These are since last year I had them. 

Titles (2012):

currency.png

ticketsystem.png

achievementsystem.png

mountsystem.png

manuksplendide.png

bifrost.png

malangdo.png

malaya-2.png

dewata.png

brasilis.png

malaya-1.png

eclage.png

devotion-1.png

storyline-1.png

features-1.png

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