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Please criticize this banner as shown at the upper portion of this thread :P.

Rate1-10 (10 is higher, and 1 is the lowest), and Why? :)

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The shape is definitely unique. I'm not quite sure if the solid background is a good thing or not...

The animated text needs a different font..if not just make it bold..kinda hard to read with it being so thin. Also they overlap with the image on the side making it even harder to read and a tad tacky.

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Hmmm...

The shape of it is quite intriguing. The background color I am like iffy on it, but its fine.

It is kind of hard to read when it goes over the render, that could be changed. I think the font itself is alright,

the font color scheme could be different. Like the red or maroon color is irritating actually, it doesn't follow the given color scheme/table if you know about that kind of thing.

Last but not least ~ The animation between text is slow and its throwing me off, that could be smoother. A lot smoother.

Other then that, 6/10

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You should try to smoothen out the rounded edges, unless you're going for that style?

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UPDATE:

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Now the font looks too cliche/generic. =/

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yea the font looks too plain now

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UPDATE:

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Now the font looks too cliche/generic. =/

That's why i suck choosing font's even i'm good on blending. :|

yea the font looks too plain now

I'mma find new one.

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Good luck with finding a good font! Your banner shape is quite unique, and it does grow on me. I agree with the previous suggestions about the font... especially for the animated words. The left side looks good (or maybe make the server name words red to make them stand out form the blackish grey background). Avoid having any words overlapping with images. The animation sequence can be smoother (in terms of the words disappearing I guess).

Good job with this banner overall! It's decent ;D.

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how about you add blurly effect on your first image for transtation like my old banner below and i will be give you 10/10 scores :D

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Is the server name.. ironic?

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Which reminds me of Nyuubi's slogan lol!

Maybe they were trying to be creative... or at least catch people's attention? Hopefully...

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the fonts color need to be harmony, 6/10

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