Linkz Posted December 20, 2011 Group: Members Topic Count: 1 Topics Per Day: 0.00 Content Count: 7 Reputation: 0 Joined: 12/20/11 Last Seen: January 15, 2013 Share Posted December 20, 2011 (edited) Hello, my nickname is Linkz and I'm new here. This is my first work to show in rAthena. http://img.jpup.net/libe.jpg Edited December 20, 2011 by Linkz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcenciel Posted December 20, 2011 Group: Members Topic Count: 69 Topics Per Day: 0.02 Content Count: 1315 Reputation: 372 Joined: 12/10/11 Last Seen: August 31, 2013 Share Posted December 20, 2011 - Your soul linker render needs cleaning up on the upper left hand side. - The menu bar looks too joined together..maybe you can add a horizontal bar in between each item to have some sort of separation. - 200 on TOP200 needs a new color. It is hard to read. - Alchemist render needs clean up on the upper right hand side. The site looks simple but there's something nice about it being simple. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yuki Posted December 20, 2011 Group: Members Topic Count: 7 Topics Per Day: 0.00 Content Count: 318 Reputation: 68 Joined: 11/13/11 Last Seen: October 29, 2017 Share Posted December 20, 2011 This is a very nice and simple website. Good job with it! I agree with the menu bar suggestion. Add vertical bars in between each button and see how that goes =D. What's the hoverover effect for the buttons? I would suggest changing the colours for both the BR and Top200 buttons. I really like your notice/news box! Lastly, the small banner with the priest image... is that where you will show screenshots, event banners, and such? I think the image is kind of random if there is no description/words on it. Furthermore, is there the effect where a box of words will pop up and rotate? That'll be a nice feature to have. Keep up the good work! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PewN Posted December 21, 2011 Group: Members Topic Count: 209 Topics Per Day: 0.05 Content Count: 892 Reputation: 27 Joined: 12/09/11 Last Seen: April 16, 2016 Share Posted December 21, 2011 i cant see the image.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yuki Posted December 21, 2011 Group: Members Topic Count: 7 Topics Per Day: 0.00 Content Count: 318 Reputation: 68 Joined: 11/13/11 Last Seen: October 29, 2017 Share Posted December 21, 2011 Click on the spoiler to reveal the image! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keim Posted December 21, 2011 Group: Members Topic Count: 27 Topics Per Day: 0.01 Content Count: 221 Reputation: 12 Joined: 12/18/11 Last Seen: July 13, 2015 Share Posted December 21, 2011 Really nice, although just like Arcenciel said, that soul linker still has the edge. You used gradient, didn't you? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jTynne Posted December 22, 2011 Group: Members Topic Count: 33 Topics Per Day: 0.01 Content Count: 399 Reputation: 198 Joined: 11/09/11 Last Seen: December 14, 2020 Share Posted December 22, 2011 Liking this; Cover everything Arcenciel pointed out and it'll be much better. I'd personally prefer to also see something going on to the right of the Soul Linker. Even if it's something to the effects of the bottom of the image, it'd give a more filled appearance. Then again, I do tend to enjoy excess.. Nice work! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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